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Tears
Contributed by
lenjoy
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:16:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I thought that you could be the one
I thought that you and I could somehow work it out
I always held on to that little piece of hope
But now its all gone
How many nights have I spent weeping about you?
How many tears have I cried?
Maybe a river or an ocean
None of which you deserved
I know that its been so long
But I thought I meant more to you
I never thought it would end up like this
You and I never together, always apart
Every tear that I shed
Was a piece of my heart going out to you
What did you do?
You ignored my tears, you ignored my heart
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lenjoy
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2004-10-12 16:16:33]
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Re: Tears
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:37:40 PM AEST
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Awwww lenjoy - what a heartbreaking first post! Welcome to YPDC!
This piece absolutely tugs at my heart. It's raw, honest... heartwrenching. I'm sorry for the pain that inspired the write... but... I thank you for sharing this. I'm sure you'll find that there are many poets here that know heartbreak. (sigh) You've come to the right place.
Please keep posting...
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