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Oh precious little seed
Contributed by
Archie
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:42:49 PM in AEST
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Oh tender sappling grow
into a kingly tree
your trials no one will know
your quests no one will see
I plant you in the ground
and I bequeath to thee
the forest will have joy
when you become a tree
Weeds come trying to steal water
frost comes chilling you to sleep
bugs come gnawing at your leavelets
but they will not overcome thee
Solatia will depart
when shadows you cast down
your shade will calm the heart
and joy you will abound
And we will see the rainbow
from the top of your canopy
I''ll wait for you til then
my gentle little tree
And we will see the sun shine
from the top of your canopy
We''ll grow strong together
my little precious seed
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-10-12 16:42:49]
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Re: Oh precious little seed
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:51:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful work. I loved
what you did with
your themes.
From tender sappling to
Kingly tree.
This is a wonderful write.
--Mothy |
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Re: Oh precious little seed
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:43:55 PM AEST
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This is a great write.
Spazzo |
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Re: Oh precious little seed
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by Dorian on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:33:25 PM AEST
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| an excellant poem archie i enjoy reading this, felt like i was in a forest . . . Dorian |
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Re: Oh precious little seed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:04:24 AM AEST
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A very fine tribute to your father.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Oh precious little seed
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:59:46 AM AEST
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| Excellent write! |
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Re: Oh precious little seed
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:59:55 AM AEST
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Weeds come trying to steal water
frost comes chilling you to sleep
bugs come gnawing at your leavelets
but they will not overcome thee
Beautifully written for your father Archie. Nature in all its glory wonderful
love sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Oh precious little seed
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:42:59 PM AEST
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=], this one was very nice. hopefully you showed this to him =] this was especially nice, "Solatia will depart
when shadows you cast down
your shade will calm the heart
and joy you will abound" |
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