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Addicted
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:21:03 PM in AEST
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Sit upon a liar's chair
Only lie to that which I call myself
Upon a ridged stone I curse with you
Upon discomfort and I would do it with no one else
Lying to everything I trusted
I set my will to the flame
Nothing left to turn to
And there is nothing else left to blame
Crimson cut and swallow
Right from the throat down to my feet
Nothing left to depend on
Addiction I still keep with me, haunting with every beat
Combine me with deception
Roll me over and mix me as you please
Disappointment and bleeding
But, happy as I'm on my knees
Images that get caught in sunlight
Ghosts that follow my step
A hint of happy beneath the gray sky
A glance of sorrow, and a secret I never kept
Filter through the pain and anguish
Sorry for something I will never understand
Just breathe and wait for the next time
But, it's only the first time and you know I never can
My liars chair has broken
And the ridged stone will fade to smooth
Crunched up in deception
Torn beneath the sorrow, broken as a tool
Too strong to look away now
I need this more than you can know
I'd throw this stone right through you
And I'd sell my soul just for you to wreap what you sew
Taint me as long as you're happy
Break me off a piece when you're done
Break me out of my liar's chair
I'll smile for the moment when I curse this battle won
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Re: Addicted
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:29:56 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to your words here. No freedom is earned with out torment. |
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Re: Addicted
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by shadows on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:34:24 PM AEST
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| Easy to relate to, and a good portrayal of what people go through, very good. |
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Re: Addicted
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:43:59 PM AEST
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I can relate. Great poem.
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Re: Addicted
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by Apardame on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:57:10 PM AEST
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| I think everyone can relate to this. Great Write! |
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Re: Addicted
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:29:28 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. excellent last stanza. |
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Re: Addicted
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:05:59 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem....i can relate all too well....awesome job
Lots of Love
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Re: Addicted
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by TheTangibleGhost on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:07:34 AM AEST
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| The poem was outstanding. It flowed well and the content was unbelievable. I am jealous, keep on writing you are so talented |
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Re: Addicted
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by Hoots on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 04:45:19 PM AEST
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That was an awesome poem. It was so...I don't know how to explain it. But it was great. Keep it up.
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