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Feast On Me
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:47:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My barriers slowly crumbling
Vulnerability
Like armor torn by bullet holes
No longer is it a shield,
One can see straight through it
A mirror of what Ive tried to conceal
Hacking away, pieces continue falling
A stranger is emerging
Lack of self
Lack of control
Fear of the unknown
Eating away at this thin shell
Feasting on what yet remains
Bite by bite, being devoured
Once engulfed, it will be no longer.
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2004-10-12 19:47:41]
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Re: Feast On Me
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:48:25 PM AEST
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| HEY YOU!!! Yes YOU!!! Say something!!! lol |
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Re: Feast On Me
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:17:11 PM AEST
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| amazing write. =] |
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Re: Feast On Me
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:01:29 PM AEST
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| oooo i liked this one alot, your use of words and expression is so powerful here, i will be reading this one over and over, great job |
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