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I regret the wrongs I've done
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:53:41 PM in AEST
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To have to see you lying there
With the machines to help you breathe
It makes me really worry
That you may not always be with me
But Im afraid that you wont hear
What I feel that I must say
Im so sorry for all the wrongs Ive done
But I cant make them go away
Im sorry for all the horrible things
I wish I never did
But you have to understand
That I was just a stupid kid
I never meant to say such things
I really regret those words
I wish that I could take them back
And make them go unheard
I never thought to just stop
Or maybe take a second look
I never meant to take
All those things I took
I never wanted to disgrace
I never meant to let you down
But so young, I was so lost
Needing only to be found
There are so many different things
You should have shown me how to be
Like how to be your son
Not to just turn your back on me
And Im haunted every morning
Still till this very day
On how I let you down
And how you threw me away
Ive grown so much without you
But Im not happy how things turned out
I wish I had only listened
Instead of trying to yell and shout
I wish I had another chance
A way to set things straight
Because this time Id try so hard
To make you think your son is great
But what hurts me the most all
Is to feel so all-alone
And even though I sometimes see you
I see no way I can atone
Im so sorry Dad, I really am
For not always making you proud
But Its hard to grow up in your image
When I never was aloud
Im not asking you to forgive me
I know that you wont ever forget
I just wish that when you think of me
I didnt fill you with regret
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Re: I regret the wrongs I've done
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:02:45 PM AEST
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Very heart breaking write but written well.
luv, huggs, strength,
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Re: I regret the wrongs I've done
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by brew on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:29:22 AM AEST
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| Seems that you relise, what and how all went wrong......yes, set the peace now, so this way you will not regret, and kick yourself later. We all make mistakes and can not turn back time..but can go forward, and make it known.....~ |
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Re: I regret the wrongs I've done
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:00:21 AM AEST
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wow this was heart breaking, left a lump in my throat *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: I regret the wrongs I've done
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:29:36 PM AEST
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Gosh, holder. I've been back to this a few times and I'm just finding it very hard to comment. This is so obviously written with much emotion. And... as I've told you... I think it is the most beautiful gift. I do hope that the process of writing this and sharing it has been rewarding.... but... no matter what - don't ever regret writing it. It needed to be written.... if for no one else but you. And you did well, holder -- you really, really did.
Knowing what this means to you...
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Re: I regret the wrongs I've done
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by humboldthunny17 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 05:10:02 PM AEST
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| Wow--other words don't really come up. I'm sorry, this is a really sad poem |
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Re: I regret the wrongs I've done
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 01:27:25 AM AEST
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oh holder you have done it again I applaud this piece very very powerful I loved it as usual...
much love.
Dani |
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Re: I regret the wrongs I've done
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by brew on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 10:25:23 PM AEST
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Hm sometimes we cant feel regret..............I lost my mom and it took me forever......But i did feel bad. We all do, feel in our own ways
Brew~ |
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