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Your Way
Contributed by
humboldthunny17
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Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:31:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your smile warms me up each day,
More than warmth from the sun.
This kinds nice though,
Its not too hot, or not hot enough,
But the perfect warmth
And when I hear you talk?
Who else could bear not to listen?
Your voice melts all my fears away,
And its not temporary,
But lasts forever.
The way you treat me
Reminds me of icecream.
You know, the kind that is super rich,
And you always want more?
But the way you treat me doesnt need to be better
Maybe its just YOU,
The way you act, or look.
Maybe its the way that you care,
Care about me
Maybe its just because I love you
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humboldthunny17
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2004-10-12 23:31:59]
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Re: Your Way
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:41:45 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write. anyone would luv this masterpeice of the beauty of luv.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Your Way
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:12:12 AM AEST
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So intensely tender and written with such a pure feeling, you make love sound so real, I am glad someone has found true love.
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Re: Your Way
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:44:47 PM AEST
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This is wonderful. Beautiful, simply beautiful. Great write. Welcome to YPDC if it's not too late or anything.
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