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A Deep Penetration
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:46:14 AM in AEST
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What you give to me is deep penetration,
That can be felt over the entire nation,
You penetrate so deep into me,
Setting every part of my insides free.
Slowly you have penetrated my heart,
Made me feel love right from the start,
You reached me in a way no-one else did,
Into your passionate world I dreamily slid.
Its as if you could hear all my prayers,
When I needed love you were there,
My eyes are no longer shut tight,
Ive wanted you since I first took a bite.
I am laid bare for you to indulge,
Take me in until you feel so full,
I am yours & you are mine,
A word to describe our love; divine.
I hold onto you like my life depends,
I feel so much for you thatll never end,
It will only grow as will our desires,
Of you my love I would never tire.
You have long become my soul mate,
You are the most precious thing to date,
Long live the legacy of you & I,
I want to be with you as time goes by.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-10-13 11:46:14]
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Re: A Deep Penetration
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:59:44 AM AEST
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What an awesome poem this one is with such a deep message. You are so wonderful and I can only hope a small part of you rubs off onto me. Great creation. Thank You
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Re: A Deep Penetration
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:13:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful Pixie, just beautiful. The recipient is truly a lucky man. It flows wonderfully. I like it alot !!!
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: A Deep Penetration
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:42:20 PM AEST
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Pixie, you're amazing!
5 stars x x x |
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Re: A Deep Penetration
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by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:57:30 PM AEST
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Very beautiful. You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself from the heart.
Blu |
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Re: A Deep Penetration
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:09:41 PM AEST
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beautiful Pixie
Michelle |
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Re: A Deep Penetration
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:05:06 PM AEST
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| Super to feel this way. great write again. stay feeling the way you do. |
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Re: A Deep Penetration
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:27:53 PM AEST
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| Loved the title, that's what caught my eye. Very beautiful write. |
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Re: A Deep Penetration
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by lovesucks on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:46:19 PM AEST
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| Magnificent.....nothing else to say just magnificent |
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