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Dead Man
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:45:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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(opening chorus, chanted by childrens voices)
Dead man walking
Dead man run
Dead man cant hide
From a gun
In his face you see his fear
Dead men quickly disappear
(music intro ~ battling lead guitars)
In a flash of light
You will fall down
Body burns before
It hits the ground
Past is present
Your futures gone
Within the darkness
There is no dawn
Dead man walking
Dead man run
Dead man cant hide
From a gun
In your face I see the fear
Dead men quickly disappear
He said, she said
Who said what?
The scenes rescripted
Your parts been cut
Let me clarify
To ease your doubt
Youre not wanted
Get the F(edit) out
Dead man walking
Dead man run
Dead man cant hide
From a gun
In your face I see the fear
Dead men quickly disappear
(instrumental break)
(a very poor rap attempt)
You thought you were a legendary player of your time
Youve finally come to see that it was only in your mind
Better find a lucky rabbits foot, perhaps a four-leaf clover
Cuz me an Mr Browning got a message for you, poser
Wake up and smell the coffee A(edit)hole, Game Over
Dead man walking
Dead man run
Dead man cant hide
From a gun
In your face I see the fear
Dead men quickly disappear
(childrens voices repeat and fade)
Dead man walking
Dead man run
Dead man cant hide
From a gun
In his face you see his fear
Dead men quickly disappear
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Nazmythian
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2004-10-13 13:45:23]
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Re: Dead Man
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:49:29 PM AEST
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a very angry song, very well written I really liked it, bet you scared him to death lol
takecare
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Re: Dead Man
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:18:50 PM AEST
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I wouldn't want to make you angry, Scott! lol. Very intense write; full of raw emotion and hate. Loved this! Another piece of perfection! The rap attempt was tres bien, mon chasseur! I like the whole feel to this poem; chilling, anger, rage... Hope your daughter is coping well. I know how a break up can hurt you; a lot. Beautiful. Perfect. I thank you, divine poet, for this angsty piece! Loved it! Eternally yours,
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Re: Dead Man
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:19:46 PM AEST
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I like your broad range
of ideas and ways of
expressing them.
This is why
you are always
a good read.
This is really, really
good stuff.
An understated epic.
So cool!
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Re: Dead Man
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:50:24 PM AEST
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Naz, very creative and well written in my opinion. It's a good thing that our mind provides us with defense mechanisms so we can write rather then act out our anger ....
just kidding of course.
This song could probably hit the top ten Country Charts, Willofree
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Re: Dead Man
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:36:18 PM AEST
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| this was very powerful and of course well written. i liked how my imagination went off with what the ex boyfriend was thinking if he read/heard this. =] dead man walking.... |
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