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FALLING FAR AWAY
Contributed by
radicalme
on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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no one undersands,
no one ever will,
the way i feel inside,
the way i want to die,
i try so hard to live,
i try so hard to give,
i feel so deep inside,
it makes me want to hide,
i feel misunderstood,
i couldnt if i could could,
could tell the minds who should,
should keep me safe and sound,
theres no one here around,
to keep me on the ground,
theres no here today,
im falling far away,
im falling far away,
im falling far away,
so pay your fee,
and take away from me,
the things i feel inside,
the things that makes me hide,
the pain that makes me cry,
the pain that makes me click,
the tapping of the sticks,
the tapping in my soul,
the one that know one knows,
you think you know me now,
just wait and see me soon,
the aging of this skeem,
that takes away my dreams,
its rising to the top,
im hanging from a string,
theres no one here today,
im falling far away,
im falling far away,
im falling far away
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2002-11-15 10:00:00]
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Re: FALLING FAR AWAY
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by crucifixioncross on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:15:08 AM AEST
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| omg i cant believe this is the least read poem and has no comments this was awesome!!!!! one of the best poems ive read and also could be put into melody and song maybe ya know and the whole scheme was perfect and well written omg i cant believ ehow much this touched me and how good it was. ive never really had the feeling of wanting to live i just never found anything to keep me here but if you did thats great and i wish you the best of luck. falling far away omg a great title too. and the ending about hanging from a string was so beautiful it made me cry and i dont cry for just no reason. this was great awesome perfect 10!!! keep ritin ema nd thanks for this and i hope more people read this and reply for you cvause its really great |
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Re: FALLING FAR AWAY
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by radicalme on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:36:14 AM AEST
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I have been writing since I was a little boy.I only write by experiances.I have alot more.
I am battling BIPOLAR and SKITZOPHRENIA.
DONT get me wrong,im not crazy as hell.I just want to express myself to the world.I will be publishing a book soon.Lets talk more.Email me at radicalme@alltel.net
THANK YOU |
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Re: FALLING FAR AWAY
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by OreO on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 12:03:09 PM AEST
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This is so inspirational i really
enjoyed this one, it says alot of deep
meaningful words and yet it's so
sad at the same time, it's creative
Thanks for sharing this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: FALLING FAR AWAY
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:28:48 PM AEST
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| Very good! |
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Re: FALLING FAR AWAY
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:32:30 PM AEST
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| this was so sad yet had so much to think about, vey good words here! God Bless Christina |
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Re: FALLING FAR AWAY
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by Blue on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 09:15:17 AM AEST
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This is an awesome poem!
I like it much better than the ones I wrote :-)
You spoke of a lot of things that I myself feel.
Thanks for bringing words to it...
Blue |
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