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Blame
Contributed by
Understood
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:17:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I want to tell you something
What is it that you want?
I want to show you something
What is it that you want?
I want you to give me something
What is it that you want?
No one will know our secret
What is it that you want?
Its your fault we did this
Am I the one at fault?
If you tell bad things will happen
Am I the one at fault?
The actions you took led to this situation
Am I the one at fault?
Ill never let the blame be on me
Ended life without sympathy
Copyright ©
Understood
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2004-10-13 18:17:14]
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Re: Blame
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:22:58 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. I like the way it's laid out. |
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Re: Blame
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:54:00 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written! Everything flows together really well. |
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Re: Blame
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:34:23 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Understood!
This is interesting... the way you've presented it really adds something. I think I like the way your mind works!
Keep writing and keep posting!
SNM |
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