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Moving On
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:16:23 AM in AEST
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Cant get this **** out of my head,
Cant get over the things that you said,
Where was you when i was down?
Whenever I needed you, you wasnt around,
Im so damaged inside, I know it wont be the same,
I sure as hell would love to put you to blame,
You took no interest in me or my brothers,
You got new kids now, and youre a better mother,
You give all of them a better life,
You also somebody else wife,
You lie and say you did the best you could,
If you could do it all over again, i dont think you would,
You say you was right there beside me, in my hospital bed,
I was so knocked out of it, i dont remember if you did,
You remember back in the days when all that mattered to you was a drink,
You didnt even stop to take the time to think,
I refuse to keep living in the past,
This pain that im feeling, will not last,
Its all your fault you made me this way,
Maybe someday you will actually pay.
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Re: Moving On
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:22:15 AM AEST
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Very good for you. I know the feelings well but u shall survive with your dedication to yourself.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: Moving On
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:27:13 AM AEST
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| You expressed yourself very well here. Thanks for sharing your work of poetry with us all in YPDC. |
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Re: Moving On
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 06:40:09 AM AEST
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great poem. thanks for sharing
Jane |
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Re: Moving On
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:56:33 AM AEST
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| always good to get things off your chest and if it rhymes so much the better..lol. great. |
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Re: Moving On
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 09:39:11 PM AEST
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Aww jenn, this is so touching and so sad.. I am sorry about this...
Hugs
Jenni |
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