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gRiLlEd ChEeSe
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:24:33 AM in AEST
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weakness and kindness
everything is not yet lost
beauty in the deep of things
face to the sky
you're so hot the sun is jealous
nothing else matters
nothing compares to you
bored in life
some one's lieing to you
she was late
you promise
thank you
the numbers been changed
you're dumb
he's a stalker
she'll give you a compliment for me
when are we leaving?
it's good to see you
i'll call you back
you want some grilled cheese?
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Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 07:51:19 AM AEST
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A very nice change of pace.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:53:04 AM AEST
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| weird...like me, I liked it! |
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Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:39:59 AM AEST
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| I like that you can transition from emotional slw paced poems to fast paced happy poems . Great work! |
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Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe
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by Aquaelius on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:18:38 AM AEST
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| Wow, people say a lot of nice things to you, "you're so hot the sun is jealous." Wow, i get more along the lines of, "you're dumb." All I hope is that grilled cheese was very good. |
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Re: gRiLlEd ChEeSe
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by TedHuggableBare on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:35:06 PM AEST
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| I loved the line 'you're so hot the sun is jealous.' Sounds like a pick-up line that a guy would use in a bar-lol. |
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