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Meadow
Contributed by
ivy
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:27:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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There is a vast meadown ahead of me,
A barren land with lovely greenery to see.
It has been untouched for many years,
People come and be there for there own pleasure.
It calls me saying it is lonely,
Please come close and hold me.
My friends are creatures of the night,
They crawl and hunt in the dark.
They leave the kill on me,
The blood and pain is all for me to see.
How long can I take all this?
I am scared and terrorised to be here.
In the night there is darkness all around,
No one is there to sing me a song.
My soul is hurt and filled with grief,
You come close and hold me please.
Copyright ©
ivy
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2004-10-14 11:27:40]
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Re: Meadow
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:59:08 PM AEST
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| emotional write. great rhythym. |
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Re: Meadow
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by BECAUSE on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:04:05 AM AEST
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I LOVE TE WAY YOU TOOK ME ON A
JOURNEY GOOD JOB!!!!! |
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Re: Meadow
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by Damien on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:46:38 AM AEST
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| I guess you were looking in the wrong direction for a song :)) good write but stick to writing positive, no one can beat you at that :"> |
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