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Sleep Becomes Her
Contributed by
jaeann
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Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:42:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pretty little princess
can't go anywhere
no one to find her
no one truly cares.
Pretty little princess
too much or not enough
no one to want all of her
no one too wise or rough.
Pretty little princess
high upon her shelf
no one to play with her
no one true to her self.
Pretty little princess
has run all out of frogs
no one to kiss her
no one to rattle or jog.
Pretty little princess
cursed from the start
no one to rescue her
no one to savor the tart.
Pretty little princess
slumbers through her trials
no one to hold her
no one ever stays awhile.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2004-10-14 11:42:20]
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Re: Sleep Becomes Her
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by pixie on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:47:00 AM AEST
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very good write, I enjoyed it, it was sad and full of feeling,
pixie xx |
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Re: Sleep Becomes Her
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:50:10 PM AEST
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AhhhhhhhhhhhJaymee dear, 'tis the soft slumber of sleep to help us forget, pretty little princess it will still be there when you rise. Hit it head on--dry those eyes......let go dear, just let go!!!!It really works........please try it so, that one day you will be free of slumbering!
I love you little pear lady, placed higher than others on the pear tree!
If you need me, I'll be up there with thee!
Warm hugs
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Re: Sleep Becomes Her
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by slayer_015 on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 08:50:12 PM AEST
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That was a beautiful work of art.I enjoy your writing style.It was a very sad write,however,
and I hope your life experiences keep giving you fuel to write,but not at the risk of you personally.Awesome job,keep writing.
Brian |
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Re: Sleep Becomes Her
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:56:24 AM AEST
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| i love it! |
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Re: Sleep Becomes Her
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:14:31 PM AEST
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((( Jaeann))) Heartbreaking in its sadness....beautiful in the way it's written.
A hug and Roses
Larry
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