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Sow A Flag
Contributed by
jason_robert_britt
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Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:17:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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I had a vision, in the sky
I caught a sight that made me cry
Dirty bombs in grubby hands
Fireworks in freedoms land
I looked across a sea of cause
Looked through the glass of human flaws
Between ideals new and old
I saw a sea of hearts grown cold
I glimpsed a pulpet drowned in blood
Wrapped in a flag, it's grave was dug
As millions stood by in salute
The piper piped his evil flute
They stand, debate, for freedoms stride
From stars and stripes they crawl and hide
Invite your friends to mankind's brunch
Mushroom feasts and A-bomb punch
Scrub yourselves clean all that you please
It's all in vain when you're diseased
War is all you've ever sown
So death is all you'll ever grow
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jason_robert_britt
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2004-10-14 13:17:51]
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Re: Sow A Flag
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:11:46 PM AEST
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Nice write my frind it's been a while since I've had the chance to read your work, well done.
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Re: Sow A Flag
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:16:40 PM AEST
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Awesome write man... this was not a vision
however this was truth. Keep on writing and
posting man.
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Re: Sow A Flag
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by carebear on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 09:38:27 PM AEST
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Hey Jason...
Wow I gotta say this poem was really something else. It was indeed a vision of truth..Keep posting please I miss your poem's...
Much love N Poet Respect
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Re: Sow A Flag
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by Cesaria1 on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:35:46 PM AEST
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| war is a terrible thing, that i will not argue . . . |
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Re: Sow A Flag
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by Cancer on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:59:07 PM AEST
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as always, it's good to see something new from you. and, as always, it's ***** incredible. a topic that many try to tackle, yet few can make anything good from it, and you once again show us all how it's done. before i yatter on forever, i'll stop now before i build yet another shrine to your talents. stop taking such lengthy breaks you bastard. keep them coming.
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Re: Sow A Flag
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by lovingkk05 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:39:13 PM AEST
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Tear. Truly you broguht tears to my eyes.
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Re: Sow A Flag
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:02:25 AM AEST
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| This is a true poem. This is a hard cold fact of life where ever you live. This is a great write. |
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