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If only you were here
Contributed by
Hopeless_Romantic
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:11:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I sit beside the window,
sipping my latte while reflecting on my day
My mind drifts off in thought
Coming to a halt when I focus on you
And the times we could spend together
Just the two of us
Left with our familiar conversation
Our unpretentious thoughts
As I sit next to this crackling fire
The only conversation is that of the enkindled wood and the blistering flame
Arguing amongst themselves
If only you were here
We would talk about our day
The busyness of it, the funny little things
We would talk about the kids
Their young joys and accomplishments
All this, if only you were here
Maybe we would play together
Strumming chords half caringly while Id hum along
Smiling and giggling at our silliness
All this, if only you were here
When all this were through
When the fire had composed itself and calmed
When the sky had darkened
Words would become obsolete
You would be mine
I would be yours
And love
Love would be ours
All this, if only you were here
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Re: If only you were here
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:23:35 PM AEST
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I can surely identify with this lovely write...
Jenni |
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Re: If only you were here
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by allymp on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:27:16 PM AEST
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| wow...its funny how some poems just take the words from you mouth...this is how i am feeling riight now...great write... |
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Re: If only you were here
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by poetryman30 on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:13:39 AM AEST
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If only...such a melancholy piece but full of love. Seperation from the one you love is so hard to take..but, when the time comes to be united, it will be such a wonderful event.
Hopefully, that time will come soon and you can both know the joy of loving each other completely.
In the scheme of life, this "time" feels like forever..but it will pass before you know it.
This is a beautiful write as are all of your works and is especially meaningful for me...Mike |
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Re: If only you were here
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 02:07:55 PM AEST
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A wonderful poem so sad for a love you miss.
Maybe you will be back together one day. Fate can surprise us in so many ways.
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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