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Well Look Who's Here
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:11:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Well look who's here
a memory
a teardrop
an awkward moment.
She's come to bid you farewell.
Well look who's here
a nightmare
a sin
something that was meant to be forgotten.
She's been hidden for a while.
Well look who's here
a heartbreak
a bombshell
the fear of never living.
She's turning,
facing you,
in all of her majesty...
"Why?"
You ask.
"Because"
She responds.
"I never promised to stay."
Well look who's here-
no longer.
Copyright ©
2ndChance
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2004-10-14 22:11:39]
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Re: Well Look Who's Here
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:41:37 PM AEST
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| amazing write. written very well. |
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Re: Well Look Who's Here
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by emystar on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:49:46 PM AEST
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Very unique write.
A bit sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Well Look Who's Here
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:07:15 PM AEST
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I like the way you presented this... it's simple - but... so not. Very interesting... You've got my attention. I'll be looking out for more of your work.
- SNM
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Re: Well Look Who's Here
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:31:55 AM AEST
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| This is excellent! I loved this poem. Very well done. |
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