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°°°Hell's Angels°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If i die before you do
I'll go to heaven and wait for you
If your not there by judgement day
I'll know you went the other way
oOo
I'll give the angels back my wings
And come to you and lose everything
Just to prove my love is true
I'll go to hell to be with you
oOo
A need so strong it makes me weak
Your name on my lips, I'll forever speak
I'll fall through cold air, half the night
To feel your kiss, to hold you tight
oOo
I cannot wait for your embrace
To see your smile, on your pretty face
Through the clouds, beneath earth i'll go
To snuggle your body, my love I'll show
oOo
Fire on your lips, for i will kiss
I'll stare the devil down, i'll give you this
Angels above will see they were wrong
Give us both pretty wings, and sing us a song
oOo
Up high they'll take us where we belong
Through earth, the clouds, a journey so long
They'll cry their tears and it'll rain on earth
For making a mistake, and causing you hurt
oOo
We'll look at eachother and sing our song
And stop in the middle, where we belong
Between heaven and earth, it'll be just us
We'll spread our wings, and share Eternal Love
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-15 18:20:00]
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 07:37:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, Oreo... Great show of eternal committment... Loved the flow on this..
Jenni |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:10:59 PM AEST
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| This poem brought a smile to my face .... lovely idea behind it. Great write. |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:04:00 PM AEST
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Oreo this was so beautiful,anything with angels I love,since I collect them! Great words
on this peice! Christina |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by alternachik29 on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:56:58 AM AEST
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oreo-
love it! nice image! |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by Yellowrose on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 11:57:32 PM AEST
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OreO you are such a great author, This poem is so brilliant. I hope the love you write about is retured to you triple fold. Thanks for being such a sweetie and reading my works. Yellowrose.
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by Yellowrose on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 11:58:05 PM AEST
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OreO you are such a great author, This poem is so brilliant. I hope the love you write about is retured to you triple fold. Thanks for being such a sweetie and reading my works. Yellowrose.
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:46:29 AM AEST
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I luved this poem,it was really great.
1 of the best on this site. |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by darkeyedman on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:14:36 AM AEST
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| loved it oreo. :) jim |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by spaceotter on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:20:32 PM AEST
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| Wow, Oreo this was great. It gives me a great feeling inside just reading it. |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by Q-DiZzY on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 01:40:06 AM AEST
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lol wooo...this was a very very good poem
Just kinda caught me off guard with the attachment towards this so called "love" that would convince you to goto *Hell* for someone...Its kool though
Love would make you do some crazy *****, so I dont blame ya...*wink*
~1~ |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 09:03:54 AM AEST
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PERFECTLY WRITTEN
AND HOPE ALL COME OUT LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT POEM ~OREO~ |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 04:47:35 PM AEST
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| Nothing can break or stop the flow of eterna love. It's forever...through the worst or through the best it doesn't matter. Nothing stops it because nothing is that powerful. Not even the threat of hell can stop it and through this poem I realize that...I just hope someday I find that type of love. Smle always and keep the poems coming |
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Re: °°°Hell's Angels°°°
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by RealCrystal on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 07:46:08 PM AEST
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| This is such a sweet poem, and it's nice to know that some people on this earth still have that unbreakable love. |
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