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Love is the Ocean
Contributed by
shanarah
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:16:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Bold and brave in our wanders of thought
warmth and freedom is often brought
seas dark waters unleashed by rage
passionable currents, his implicit stage
powers and strengths, you can not measure
true love feels the touch of his pleasure
I admire the waves as they drift up to shore
like love, lonely and empty, we ache for more
flowing steadily, in the body we call ocean
love is the same with heartfelt emotion
unpredictable waters, as we claim it to be
desires flow with love, like the endless sea
patients and time, most certain to find here
true love supports you with nothing to fear
Copyright ©
shanarah
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2004-10-15 13:16:24]
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Re: Love is the Ocean
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by pixie on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:31:55 PM AEST
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wonderfully written,thanks for sharing,
pixie xx |
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Re: Love is the Ocean
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 01:33:39 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful. I know this surging powerful love. You will hear it a lifetime. Even long after it is gone.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Love is the Ocean
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:28:58 PM AEST
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Your attention to esthetical detail, in concert with the nice flow and smooth rhyme, paint a stunning picture. Very well done, a true pleasure to read from the first letter. Keep up the awesome work!
Swimming in a napalm sea,
-V.S.
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