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CITY OF THE DEAD
Contributed by
hellsfallenangel
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 03:20:43 PM in AEST
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The city of the dead thats where they all go. The city of the dead thats where my mind always seems to go. My spirit will be going there soon enough. Ive been waiting, waiting long enough for the day when I go to the city of the dead. THe day has come for me to go, but I have one last peice of advise. Enjoy life as much as u can cause u never know when your day will come to join me in THE CITY OF THE DEAD.
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Re: CITY OF THE DEAD
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by Lovingangel4u on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:47:15 PM AEST
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Hope its a happy city! Something I read the other day… We are not humans having a spiritual experience but we are spirits having a human experience. : )Something to think about.
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Re: CITY OF THE DEAD
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by karmen on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:46:15 PM AEST
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| its a good way of thinking and it shows how u feel about it but u should add a couple more lines and put ur emotion of how u feel about this more into it then it already is... u should make this poem line for line instead of like... a paragraph or story, there are a couple spelling errors... but thats ok cause everyone makes them... |
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Re: CITY OF THE DEAD
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by justme03 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:30:29 AM AEST
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| :o i ABSOLUTLY love this one!!! im already in the city of dead. its nie to kno im not the only one here. . . |
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