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Contributed by
inoc
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:03:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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what a splendid silent night
you look oh so heavenly tonight
you are exquisite
breath in every clear word complete
spoken to thee
and you will see
beauty within
can be also beautiful skin
that sweet perfume
holds the admired loving tune
grasp that basic dream
like a shimmering waterfall with whipped cream
eat it ever so gradual
so your success copied in your future generations manuel
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-10-15 16:03:12]
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Re: You
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by carmen_queasy on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:14:26 PM AEST
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| This is a really pretty poem :) |
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Re: You
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by a_bear on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:43:35 PM AEST
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| I'm lost..is this a dessert? |
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Re: You
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by inoc on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:13:41 AM AEST
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lol a_bear
a figure of speech...
eg...take all positive words and beautiful surrounds....and tasty things...treasure each item and savour it for your future!
sorry I wrote this quickly so the 2 girls could also write one after me...called ..I'm Bored!
cheers!~
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Re: You
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:58:39 AM AEST
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I thought this was your basic poem of love and adoration until I got to the end and said "huh?" What a wake up call! Certainly an interesting write.
Stitch |
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