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Dusk
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:27:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I hate the sun.
'Cause when it sets
and the day is done
I know you'll go with it.
No rope could tie you down,
no seringe could bring you 'round,
and as I saw you oh so high,
I knew all you wanted was to fly.
I hate the sun.
'Cause when it sets
and the nights begun,
I don't know where you'll be.
Smiling happy at untold strangers
vaguely happy,
vaguely aware,
of the vomit in your hair,
how blank, your stare,
your mind, your soul,
you're outta control,
you have no contol.
I thought you were just having fun,
but as time goes by,
and I see what you've done,
I cry to the sky,
I hate the sun.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2004-10-15 16:27:46]
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Re: Dusk
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by metro on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:41:25 PM AEST
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brought up a lot of bad memories...
very well-written, thank you for posting this...
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Re: Dusk
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by Alina on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 07:09:18 PM AEST
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Very deep and personal. This poem kinda sounds like if that was me talking to my inner self. Good Write.
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Re: Dusk
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by clotti on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:00:39 AM AEST
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| i like this poem, it kinda shows the addiction but also how much you hurt. i like the way the sun and darkness is broguht into the poem, it makes more of an impact. thank you |
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