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Love's Last Plea
Contributed by
Arius-Inues
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:39:40 PM in AEST
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What happened to us,
And where did you go,
Why have you stoped talking to me,
I thought you loved me,
I thought you cared,
I guess I was wrong,
I guess I meant little to you,
I will never love someone the way,
The way that I loved you,
Why have you stoped caring,
And what did I do wrong,
Please tell me,
I miss you so,
I guess this is the end,
For something that never,
Got off land,
Please give me a chance,
But if you dont,
Tell me,
And I will try to forget your face,
But will never truely win,
The fight to lose you,
And I will try to win,
The fight to win your heart.
(this is about a love that I never got to have and hold, just thought that you may wanna know)
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Re: Love's Last Plea
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by theMoth on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:41:51 PM AEST
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One of the saddest poems.
A helluva write.
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Re: Love's Last Plea
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by AH on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:08:40 PM AEST
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| I've been there before and I know how you might feel... Good write and I hope writing this helped you feel better about the lost love. |
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Re: Love's Last Plea
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:12:47 AM AEST
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love is fickle, some you win some you lose, and sometimes it burns, been in your situation, it isnt the greatest feeling, but this is written well plenty of feeling, showing a strong will to keep on trying, strength for not giving up, even though you didnt win, no matter, you will find someone soon enough.
Beautifully written, clear images painted, overall a cool poem. |
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