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A Simple Ending
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:51:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My heartbeat quickens
My pulse is racing
My hands tremble-
Guided by anger.
Feeling faint
A splatter on the floor
A pool below me
It matters no more.
A deep inhale
No release
I meet the ground
Emotions cease.
Copyright ©
cuddlytiger17
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2004-10-15 17:51:18]
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Re: A Simple Ending
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:22:59 PM AEST
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| Wow. It's short, but it gets the message across. Good job. |
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Re: A Simple Ending
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by xemptydecemberx on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 06:47:09 PM AEST
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| it was be short, but the last line "emotions cease" hits hard. Good write. |
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Re: A Simple Ending
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 07:42:22 PM AEST
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Ohh I really this this, short, to the point and it flows perfectly. Love it!
- Becca |
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Re: A Simple Ending
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:12:22 PM AEST
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| ct, self-inflicted torment won't do you any good, luckily i am not there to kick your ass.lol, seroiusly like my drinking it won't change anything. |
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Re: A Simple Ending
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:12:30 PM AEST
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| ct, self-inflicted torment won't do you any good, luckily i am not there to kick your ass.lol, seroiusly like my drinking it won't change anything. |
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Re: A Simple Ending
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:12:33 PM AEST
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| ct, self-inflicted torment won't do you any good, luckily i am not there to kick your ass.lol, seroiusly like my drinking it won't change anything. |
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