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Can We Work It Out
Contributed by
Mysti
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 07:33:24 PM in AEST
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I dont know what went wrong
We used to get along
We were so happy then
I used to your best friend
Baby lets turn the page
Now it all seem strange,
We need to rearrange, because
We both need to change.
Can we Work it Out
We need to start anew
I dont know what I would do
Not being here with you
After all we been through, its choice
i dont want choose
So baby can we work it out
Can we back to the day when things were easy
I was your baby you was my boo
And things we said we would
Neva do we didnt have much but and our
Love was just enough
so baby tell me can we work it out
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Mysti
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2004-10-15 19:33:24]
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Re: Can We Work It Out
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by a_bear on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 08:00:49 PM AEST
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| wish I knew the tune...darn. |
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Re: Can We Work It Out
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 09:10:46 PM AEST
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I feel this one. I hope you receive the answer you want....
~Breezy |
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Re: Can We Work It Out
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:36:02 AM AEST
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| a very nice song. in your last stanza i think you need to add some commas and periods though, i was tripping over myself trying to understand what you were saying. it is "you were" by the way. if it doesnt work out theres always something better. =] |
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