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SaYiNg GoOdByE
Contributed by
Butterfly_love
on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I know its time to say no more and say goodbye
But I cant bring myself to look into youre eyes and say farewell
Theres no me without you, you complete me
I know what I have to do
But my heart gets in the way and holds on
At night I lay in bed looking at the stars
Wishing upon them
hoping you will never forget me
Now that you are here with me
I cant bring myself to say goodbye
It will hurt me roughly
The feeling of having you in the vicinity of
I know I can count on you
To help me through life
To direct me astray
When you are near by
Youre existence puts me in track of life
Youre my best friend were so comparable
We walk the streets they all ask if were sisters
Deep down I know we are
Youre my other half
Youre my heart
Youre my soul
Greatest of all youre my best friend till the end of time.
Even though I have to say goodbye
Youll always be present inside my heart
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Butterfly_love
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2004-10-15 23:01:47]
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Re: SaYiNg GoOdByE
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:43:17 PM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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Re: SaYiNg GoOdByE
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by Yousef on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:29:11 PM AEST
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Very good one too, but I didn't understand the reason of saying goodbye!! and the line saying "There’s no me without you, you complete me" that's a very powerful line, and saying "You’re my other half, You’re my heart, You’re my soul", Wow all this, you made me wonder is there is friendships like this nowadays!!
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Re: SaYiNg GoOdByE
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:44:30 PM AEST
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| Very sweet! The person you had to say goodbye to is very lucky to have you as a friend. Very sad yet loving piece. Great job! |
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