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Childish Eyes
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:54:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Still so much a child
Disconnected and disjointed
Familiar in only my own perverse silence
And only there
Hiding alone in my personal sandbox
Got my head hidden under my pillows
Still waiting for the death of anxiousness
Still childish enough to think it will come
Looking out behind hidden eyes
Peeking into a world where I should belong
Yet still lurking in the shadows
Hoping something will force me out
Still waiting for a hand extended
Still trying to recapture carelessness
Still wishing I could change the world
Even though I'm still just a little girl
Counting on the adventures of others
Vicarious is the only life I lead
Still little sister to all I've known
Still something hidden and contained
Still sitting quietly waiting for approval
Trusting in all visible and not
Can't quite shake the illusion
Though it's been home for far too long
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MysticFireFairy
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Re: Childish Eyes
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:57:41 AM AEST
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Nice poem, my inner child is dying to get out lol.
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Re: Childish Eyes
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:01:53 AM AEST
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You have described my emotions inside to a T
Wow an incredible writesimply fantastic
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Re: Childish Eyes
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by shanarah on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:19:45 AM AEST
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i think I have my own personal sand box I hide in. awsome poem. take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: Childish Eyes
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:20:30 PM AEST
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beautiful poem...you'd probably enjoy my poem Rape The Child From Within
I posted it twice because I showed what i ment on the second one...because some guy banned me from his site because he thought i was pro rape...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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