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Fear
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 10:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Fear me
The one who is on his knees
White pants dirtied and diseased
An evil eye
That rolls
But sees
Hands that are inescapable
Deadly in the crossfire
Chained to the wickedness
That erupted within
Crumbling what was left of my innocence
Crucifying me with who I had become
I lingered in my own thoughts
On my knees
Within my closed eyes
I began to see who I really needed to be
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pyrofungus
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2004-10-16 10:51:42]
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Re: Fear
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:57:26 AM AEST
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| Good write..i liked this 1.. |
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Re: Fear
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 01:48:03 PM AEST
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Wowie zowie,
A cool little poem.
Really liked the verbal images
you inspired.
The rolling evil eye
especially.
--Mothy |
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