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3 Way
Contributed by
reilt
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:40:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Lying between ideals of them
Menage-a-trois
Romancing thoughts
And chasing dreams of him
Then him
Til here I am
Caught between
A rock
And a hard place.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-10-16 11:40:02]
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Re: 3 Way
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:54:57 AM AEST
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Ouch. This is clear...clearly frightening. Not a good place to be. Maturity and contentment lies in knowing what is best. When one feels unsure, God is the only guide toward the right answer. This is well-written and eerily descriptive.
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Re: 3 Way
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:59:31 AM AEST
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interesting...very good though...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: 3 Way
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 01:41:33 PM AEST
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The title will guarantee many reads.
Caught between a what
and a hard place...
oh, just a rock...
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Re: 3 Way
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by Ina on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:05:32 AM AEST
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this isnt really about a threesome...
in my mind it is not.
clever, confusing your poor readers...
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