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My Brother
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 01:20:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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When he left I just said goodbye Didn't show that I cared that he was going away I looked back on all the good times When we fought and we laughed And sometimes were nice You only were nice when you wanted me to help Play football with you or throw a ball around You made me call and order your pizzas Helpless big boy didn't like to pick up the phone As your innocent little sister which you would laugh at now I was sad that you left, but you wouldn't know that now Whenever you come home My heart jumps with joy I wish that you could stay, but I act like I don't want you there You never say I love you Even to your mom At the wedding of our cousin You danced with a girl I was jealous because I asked you to dance You turned me down and threw me around It made me feel hurt that you wouldn't dance with me But I just moved on and walked away If only you knew How much I loved you But you know that I do Because I have told you You said I hate you I don't love you back One simple I love you was all that I asked Why couldnt you just say it Once was enough You didn't so it made me feel unloved Blaming everything that happened on me Never wanted me to be free How could you do all of this to me And just go away and leave At college you are there Calling mom everyday Telling her things like my rent is paid! One day you talked to me for a minute or so But that minute was the best I didn't want you to go Here I am all alone Left with my mom and sister, but no you You left not only me, but you left a family Going to college is a good thing, but not if you didnt want me to see you All of my emotion has not been said You laugh at me because of the hair on my head You make simple comments that are not sweet And expect me to help you whenever you need Walking away without a goodbye I ran to my room and started to cry How could you be so mean and not give one simple goodbye I don't hate you, but I don't love you People ask if I miss you and I tell them no But in my heart I really do I really do love you Never one hug did you ever give We used to have fun when we were just kids You told me you didnt know any better then The pictures tell a different story But don't worry it is all through now You are gone and I am happy Goodbye the one have fun in school Fail a class and break a rule And in the end when you make it through Remember the one that was there for you
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UnlovedChild
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Re: My Brother
(User Rating: 1 ) by tears_of_blood on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:56:17 PM AEST (User
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thats poem was really good you put alot of strong words that made it sounds so right well keep it up. |
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Re: My Brother
(User Rating: 1 ) by Always on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 06:16:50 PM AEST (User
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You know I miss my brother, thanx for the read. *s* |
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Re: My Brother
(User Rating: 1 ) by SkaterGirl16 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:43:06 AM AEST (User
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Your poem is wonderful and full of emotion. I loved it. :) |
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