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Alluring Bait
Contributed by
Carrie
on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 01:31:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The test is daunting,
and I always fail
to let go of the notion
that love will prevail.
Life gives alluring bait
of utter bliss,
a perfect picture
sealed with a kiss.
I reach to take it
and hold it dear.
Perception declines
when its so near.
From that moment on
the quizzical scheme
is that everything changes
from what it seemed.
The heart is tarnished
from simple use
but still awakens
to recognize the ruse.
We love again
despite the net
that eagerly falls on us
and yet
Why take such risk
when darkness waits?
Why battle your way
through the salty rains?
Why face the desert
of empty dreams?
Love gives alluring bait
of utter bliss,
a perfect picture
sealed with a kiss.
Copyright ©
Carrie
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2002-07-18 13:31:04]
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Re: Alluring Bait
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 03:40:41 PM AEST
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| Love does give us some false hopes sometimes and can make things look so easy when in fact they are the total opposite. But in the end it's all worth it...great write. |
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Re: Alluring Bait
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by humphdj on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 05:25:22 PM AEST
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This is great
Antisipation is wonderful.....the reality we soon get used to...........untill we have lost it.........and antisipate it's return
If this makes sense?
Good write
Rgds
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