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NOT WAVING BUT DROWNING
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:38:02 PM in AEST
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Nobody heard him, the dead man,
But still he lay moaning:
I was much further out than you thought
And not waving but drowning.
Poor chap, he always loved larking
And now he's dead
It must have been too cold for him his heart gave way,
They said.
Oh, no no no, it was too cold always
(Still the dead one lay moaning)
I was much too far out all my life
And not waving but drowning.
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Re: NOT WAVING BUT DROWNING
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:07:56 AM AEST
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that title caught my eye as this was a true story here where I live...
he died in the river drowning not waving
nice write though
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