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Ritualistic Love
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 05:50:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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falling in love
and falling away
to the ends of the earth on this armagaedon day
finally true
the lies we have shared
and the murders we loved and the violence that cared
shotguns in mouths
triggers in hand
murdering suicide true love once again
the photos of wrists
bleeding through slits
that love has produced, those marvelous cuts of fire
the blood we drank
flowing from the wound
the death that we lived we'll love very soon
candles and angels
and candlight lies
its funny the way the way my heart bleeds and dies
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abnormalpunk
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2004-10-16 17:50:45]
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Re: Ritualistic Love
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:04:05 PM AEST
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That was a really awesome poem. Very good flow, word usage was excellent...thanks for sharing
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