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The Unseen
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 06:59:25 PM in AEST
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Youre killing me
Killing me inside
But you cant see it
Because youre blind
Youre tearing me to pieces
Tearing apart my soul
But you cant see it
Your hearts too cold
So I abide here
All alone in my room
Contemplating ways that I
Could end this doom
Ways to disengage
All this pain Im feeling
Sharp razor blades
Are my way of dealing
But you'd never notice that
Because all you can perceive
Are ways to please yourself
As I carry on the unseen...
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cuddlytiger17
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2004-10-16 18:59:25]
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Re: The Unseen
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 10:40:42 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: The Unseen
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:19:27 PM AEST
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| A you know i won't agree with you here, just so you know. i love you i really do so as a freind i'm not going to sugar coat things for you, CUTTING IS NOT HEALTHY!!!! hope you get thru this mess to come out ok, or at least half sane. : ) |
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Re: The Unseen
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:19:41 PM AEST
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I know this feeling...cutting is my thing too....great write....awesome job...
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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