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HELP ME DANCE
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:05:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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thinking of you makes me smile haven't felt like this in quiet awhile
close my eyes see your face imagine myself in your embrace
warm to the touch your lips so sweet can hardly stand on my feet
your taste so rare....your skin so fair
eyes so blue, like drowning pools
captivate by your light, my dreams take flight
your glance sends me in a hopless trance
the gates open into the garden of romance
my tears become the mist off the flowers, imaging you there gives me power
my eyes to you do nothing my feelings for you are nothing
i can not dance in the garden of romance
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2004-10-16 19:05:59]
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Re: HELP ME DANCE
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:12:59 PM AEST
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| This is a feel the romance poem. I like it |
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Re: HELP ME DANCE
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:34:45 PM AEST
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A beautiful write...
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Re: HELP ME DANCE
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:19:02 PM AEST
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I like this one very much. It's not often such emotion is wedded with such a skillful and poetic structure. Excellent work!
May your road rise up.
Andrew |
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Re: HELP ME DANCE
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by Red_October on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:10:20 PM AEST
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| I think I got the meaning of the poem up until the last 2 lines...it is beautiful nonetheless. I like the line "your glance sends me in a hopless trance", I know that feeling all too well. Let the ink flow! Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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