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Tired
Contributed by
Mysti
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Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:30:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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happiness has turnned into a mess
the man i used to ask god to bless is now
only causing me stress
everyone says this is only a test and
be patient be because marriage is heaven sent
but they just don't know about the time i have spent
please be humble, always respectful and never talk back
was what i was told...
funny for some reason i felt like i was sold
nights heated by passion
but the days are lonley and cold.
Maybe i should just walk away,
if only he would give me one reason
why i should stay or not go a stray
into the comforting arms of another man to lay.
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Mysti
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2004-10-16 19:30:37]
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Re: Tired
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:54:00 PM AEST
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Beautifully done. I Love the way you compose your words to create such a meaningful picture of art for the minds eye to see. When it comes to love never listen to others but only your heart as it will never miss guide you. Please keep the ink flowing and those words growing cause you are awesome. Your friend.
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