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Someone to Die for
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 08:12:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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suicidal pleasure
runs throught his viens
attempted, one time too many
could this day be his last?
only he knows
as he pushs down the hall
the same cuts
cover his skin
repeated
layered
red and infected
inside he cries
head swimming
eyes glazed, crystal sorrow
as he climbs to the top of this mountain
of pain and regret
broken soul
torn heart
noone to love him
for who he is
he has nobody
all alone in this vast universe
all he can do is wait
and hope for release from this hell
you name it, he's tried it
overdose, bleed to death, jumping into traffic, the list gose on.
he steadys himself, on the ledge
as humanity smiles, taunting him, daring him
seemingly thinking
"Goodbye Cruel World"
all his notes, left in the right places
for people to read, and not shed a tear for this broken soul
all that is left,
is the fatal leap
sparking him
beauty casting suicide
tears stream down his face,
he didnt want it to end like this
lying shattered, like his heart
with no one to weep, of his loss
all he wanted,
all he needed
was someone to die for
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-10-16 20:12:10]
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Re: Someone to Die for
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:59:05 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: Someone to Die for
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:06:43 AM AEST
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| this is so heartfelt |
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Re: Someone to Die for
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by emphaticplacebo on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:32:25 AM AEST
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Awesome write! You almost made me shed a tear there, particularly :
"lying shattered, like his heart
with no one to weep, of his loss
all he wanted,
all he needed
was someone to die for"
You have an amazing talent, keep it up! |
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