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You broke my heart
Contributed by
Archie
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:08:55 AM in AEST
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Well- I-
I thought you were in love
but I guess that I was wrong
or else you would not have broken my heart
I trusted you
and you cheated me
guess we were not meant to be
or else you would not have broken my heart
I gave you love so true
did all you asked me to
and yet I find you now
kissing another guy
My whole world is destroyed
bitterness now employed
for what you have done to me
I'll never be
the same as before you
all that's left for me is tears
since the day you betrayed my heart-
I will never be the same
since the day that you broke my heart.
I wrote this song earlier this year. It is my 3rd try at that style of music. I used to listen to it alot growing up.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-10-17 04:08:55]
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Re: You broke my heart
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by emystar on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:12:33 AM AEST
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Sad but very good write.
Aaaah Yeah, I rmember the 60's
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: You broke my heart
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 07:43:45 AM AEST
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I really like this Arch....but damn...did ya have to go and make me feel so old?? lmao :o)
Well done as always
Barkeep!!
Larry |
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Re: You broke my heart
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:42:13 AM AEST
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| A beautiful song though sad, awesome rythem, and flowing lyrics, vivid feelings portrayed through out, cool to read. |
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Re: You broke my heart
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:28:48 AM AEST
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Excellent Archie yes I remember the 60s feel old now (sings doo wop) great lyrics to this one
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: You broke my heart
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:28:40 PM AEST
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| who put the bop in bop shu bop...lol. I love that style...man those were the days...sha na na..the big bopper..guess how old I am??? no..no.don't...that was my sister...I listen to her music..rotflmao. Great song..she'll love it!!! |
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