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My Voice
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:21:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My voice is but an echo
faded by an obstacle
-my own mind
My voice is but a shadow
hidden and still
my voice, I wait to find
My voice is but a mirage
eager to appear
and lifetimes of silences
sit, waiting to be pierced
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bonita2689
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2004-10-17 13:21:18]
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Re: My Voice
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by sammydid on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 11:33:00 AM AEST
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crap! that was awesome! way better than mine. i bet we had different reasons, though. i combined my strep- throat with my anger and out came that crap, but yours has a lot more... i dont know... depth.
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