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Lost love
Contributed by
Adam_me2
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:00:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We live our lives, we love, we lose.
But I knew you were there.
We spend our time, for love, for loss.
But I sacrificed much.
We rest our minds, on love, on loss.
Obliging thoughtsbut nothing more.
We mislay our trust, through love, through loss.
Hopes and dreams, nevermore.
I lost you, through love, through loss.
Forevermore, I miss you my love.
Copyright ©
Adam_me2
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2004-10-17 15:00:13]
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Re: Lost love
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:45:38 PM AEST
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It's a nice eloquent little poem.
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Re: Lost love
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:38:28 PM AEST
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that was beautiful
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Re: Lost love
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by Ezekiel on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:59:49 PM AEST
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Your use of love and loss and the repetitive placement of those words give the poem an effective cadence. The poem is good, well done.
God's peace.
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