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Love
Contributed by
Hearts
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:34:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I seem to notice everything always changes.
Noone can stop my pain.
Only I can change the way I feel
just cannot take the hurt away.
Is this the way life is meant to be.
I believe only in what I see.
At times, death seems to the best idea,
other times the world is a good place to be
and I want to be alive.
Freedom definitely comes from time to time,
But are we ever truly free all the time?
I think at times we need not forget
that we need to obey.
Far too many are dying
and far too many are destroying life.
It dont really matter what color you are
loving one another is my way of life.
People are People!
so, help one! help all!
please, make that be your way
and all will better someday!
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Hearts
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2004-10-17 17:34:19]
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Re: Love
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by Archie on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:47:04 PM AEST
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| I get you're meaning but your thoughts are fragmented. Try to be more consistent the next time. Good write |
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Re: Love
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by Archie on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 05:47:08 PM AEST
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| I get you're meaning but your thoughts are fragmented. Try to be more consistent the next time. Good write |
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