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Storm Of Life
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:17:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What depresses one
Rejuvenates another
The sky grows dark
A grayish blur of life
Moving slowly above
Allowing the world
To spin around you.
A light, cold rain
Invigorates your soul
Reminding you that
Youre still alive.
The wind picks up
Sending a spiral of leaves
Sailing past your curious eyes.
Thunder booms in the distance
Startling those unaware.
Lightening strikes nearby
Sending a spark of light
Through the moist air
What depresses one,
Rejuvenates another.
Copyright ©
cuddlytiger17
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2004-10-17 20:17:17]
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Re: Storm Of Life
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by Kie-Kie on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:20:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem...so true...
Keep writing,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Storm Of Life
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:26:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Spazzo |
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Re: Storm Of Life
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by Archie on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:46:29 PM AEST
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| Hmm I think your poem title does not fit your poem. Your content does not exactly fit. This is a good write any way. |
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Re: Storm Of Life
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 08:50:38 PM AEST
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| Archie don't think so literally. If you look deeper you'll find the title is perfect. |
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Re: Storm Of Life
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:40:07 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Storm Of Life
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by shadows on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:03:14 PM AEST
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| I think the title fits, great poem, really ,great. |
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Re: Storm Of Life
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:33:34 PM AEST
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Pretty cool poem.
--Mothy |
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