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I Wish
Contributed by
Kevin
on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:04:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Why cant I tell you what you mean to me?
Why cant I show you, why cant you see?
Why am I afraid of speaking to you?
How am I going to go on, what am I to do?
I care for you so much, yet you just dont know,
But I just cant tell you, I just cant show.
I just cant talk, can barely speak,
When Im around you, even my knees feel weak.
What to do, what to say,
Why do I do this day after day?
Three simple words, that I have to do,
Open my mouth and say, I love you.
So many nights have I lie awake and thought,
Some courage and answers are what I sought.
Such a simple solution is in front of my eyes,
Just out of reach, above my head and beyond the skies.
Funny how love can hurt so much,
Funny how it pains me such.
Funny how you can do this to me,
Funny how Im tortured constantly.
How can something so great be worth all this pain?
Dont know what to do, just cant get you out of my brain.
Not eating, losing oh so precious sleep,
You are the reason why I weep.
I wish that we could be together,
I wish you knew I will love you forever.
I also wish the pain would go away,
But I want your love, I wish that to stay.
So, as each day passes, there you will be,
A constant pain, yet a love to me.
Ill care for you always, that is true,
And I wish you knew that I truly love you.
10-17-04
Copyright ©
Kevin
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2004-10-17 21:04:18]
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Re: I Wish
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:09:24 PM AEST
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Wonderful write. You should give this poem to who you love.
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Re: I Wish
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 11:16:59 PM AEST
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| Wow, This poem is really good, I can relate to it lol well Ya i think you should give this poem to whom you like so very much lol well I really hope everything works out Good Luck, and great write !!!!!! |
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Re: I Wish
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by Silent_Storm on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:54:49 PM AEST
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| wow...another amazing beautiful poem! you have a great talent in expressing your feelings! |
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Re: I Wish
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:39:20 PM AEST
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I give this a 3 out of 5.
I award it this because I dont feel much from your words.
This isnt something to be insulted by, it just didnt reach me.
Not deep enough. Im not held or captivated in anyway, but my expectations are high so dont worry. |
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