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Hope is Slipping
Contributed by
essentially9
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:09:38 PM in AEST
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Hope is Slipping
From the flames
With remade dreams
Life begins for me
Broken promises
Now seem nonexistent
To me as does everything
No longer blood tinted
With this sin of giving in
To bleed to live
Taking a step at a time
Through life
Knowing it will pass me by
Running away to the future
Hoping to make it through
But a better future isn't for sure
Even with nothing to give
I saved myself to live
Hoping to not slip again
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Re: Hope is Slipping
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 09:19:42 PM AEST
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Pretty sad. But there is hope, for a time I thought there was no hope for me, but I got changed. There is hope for us all. It's God. He can give you hope.
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Re: Hope is Slipping
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by Archie on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:13:25 AM AEST
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| I can relate to that. Often for me it takes me getting tired of being sad before I can feel joy again. That is usually better said than done. |
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Re: Hope is Slipping
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:44:03 PM AEST
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| I'm sure things will look up for you. Keep holding on. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Hope is Slipping
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by thewordzwithin on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:33:38 PM AEST
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| Hey, we've all been there before. Hope never slips, it's us that does the slipping. Hope is always there, it's just harder for us to see it in the dark. Remember that and you will be OK. Oh yeah... Sorry, great poem. Very well written. Full of emotion. |
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Re: Hope is Slipping
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:22:16 PM AEST
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This so sad. I hope all is well with you.
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Re: Hope is Slipping
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 08:49:08 PM AEST
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| agaian very good poem here..I stay impressed.. |
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Re: Hope is Slipping
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:18:45 PM AEST
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| This is such an emotional write. Good job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Hope is Slipping
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:12:05 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. We all step away from the path at one time or another. It is among the greatest blessings that we can begin over and move forward with hope for different and better.
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Re: Hope is Slipping
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:32:14 AM AEST
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We all slip at times in one way or another.
I'm glad u choose live and I'll pray more 4 u.
Very good write. It takes courage to tell something so close to u to a buntch of strongers or even pepole u know.
Keep the good owrk and awesome writing.
This write will give others hope.
huggs, prayer, faith, hope,
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