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And the Talking Stopped
Contributed by
ginsdance
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 04:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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And the talking stopped.
Heartbreaking silence ensued
And tore their hearts apart.
In love, yet so far away,
The best of friends...
Could not bridge that silence of pain
Threatening to tear them apart.
And then the teardrops fell.
Coursing so slowly down her cheeks,
Wrenched individually
From her heart's longing reach.
And then beaten deep into the ground
By her flailing fists that had flung them from her face,
Then pain so deep inside her heart that friendship was efacced.
And then he crossed to her.
Grabbing her still wet hand,
Soaked by salty tear drops,
He tried to offer comfort,
Yet she flung it far away.
Angry now, at herself, the situation,
She crosses to her own car,
Just wants to be alone,
And then he catches her,
Makes her look at him,
And then he held her.
Worlds slid back into orbit,
All slammed back into regal order,
And the talking stopped.
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2002-11-16 04:40:00]
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Re: And the Talking Stopped
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 06:15:31 AM AEST
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Hi Gin..loved this... Lovely imagery...great write...
Jenni |
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Re: And the Talking Stopped
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by Chicken on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 06:02:00 AM AEST
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| I loved it |
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Re: And the Talking Stopped
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:25:45 AM AEST
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| Very well done...Great write! :o) |
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Re: And the Talking Stopped
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:26:55 PM AEST
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| It was really good but I am sorta confused a little bit. Nice write though. |
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