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More Matter, with Less Art
Contributed by
theraven
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Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:40:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Stepping through the doorway, out of the darkness,
and I see You.
Emitting a luminesce from St. Michael himself,
Your unwavering beauty strikes me still;
and like a defending bull you never step back.
With sweaty hands and cottonmouth, I
approach you stammering, nervous like a
child caught with his hand in the cookie jar.
Eyes averted, incomprehensive sounds spill
from my mouth as your folded arms and tapping
shoe continue to intimidate my feelings.
Finally, silence, as one mumbled word
catches your ear. As you speak, questioning
me, I feel an uplifting; with new breath
I glance up and, with a gentle finger over
your lips, quiet you. Leaning close,
whispering softly in your ear,
I love you.
-The Raven-
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Re: More Matter, with Less Art
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by Clementine on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:48:12 PM AEST
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| Beautiful writing. I love it. |
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Re: More Matter, with Less Art
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 11:08:14 PM AEST
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Oops, catch me now, I am swooning! This is so gentle and loving, Raven.
Smiles,
Rita |
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