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MY BEST FRIEND,LOVER,HUSBAND!
Contributed by
chantal
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I feel like the walls are closing in on me,
Your every where I look you see.
I pretend that I am glad you went away,
God how I wished you would of stayed.
I miss you more and more in everway,
I can't take this not another day.
My heart is torn all part,
Right from the very start.
I'm dying inside,
I don't like this rollercoaster ride.
I ask everyone if I am being unreal,
But I can't help the way I feel.
I'm missing you can't you see,
I love you Mark Do you love me.
A thousand words spoken over the phone,
We hang up and it is just the tone.
In a million life times the pain I feel,
Is so hurtful and very much real.
I walk around with this frown,Wish I looked up And see you but your no where around.
How could I let my best friend go away,
I'm missing you I wished you stay.
You know a million years from now,
I will always love you still. I Love You!
And I Miss You!
Copyright ©
chantal
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2002-11-16 05:20:00]
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Re: MY BEST FRIEND,LOVER,HUSBAND!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 06:00:30 AM AEST
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How very touching...I hope he returns very soon to you and your daughter.. Lovely write..
Jenni |
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Re: MY BEST FRIEND,LOVER,HUSBAND!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 09:58:08 AM AEST
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| very touching,I know how you feel,when my husbands gone on the road I miss him terribly,Great write! Christina |
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Re: MY BEST FRIEND,LOVER,HUSBAND!
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by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 01:01:26 PM AEST
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This is so sweet, i really
enjoyed this one, it's so full of
pain and need. Thanks for
sharing it. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: MY BEST FRIEND,LOVER,HUSBAND!
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by Ooniegirl on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 01:23:46 AM AEST
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| I admire the love you have for your man. Sometimes being apart can be strengthening - it gives us a different perspective from which to appreciate the ones we love. I hope he returns home soon, safe and sound. |
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