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To My Big Brother
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:07:03 AM in AEST
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You've always been there
Although you're not here
A light in the storm
Sweet brother dear
The only one I know
Who can change my mood around
Help me to feel safe
Let me sleep sound
You've never let me down
You've stood up for me
Even against people you love
People you've known since you were three
And that, my dear brother
Tells me something quite clear
You really do love me
Although you're not here
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-10-18 05:07:03]
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Re: To My Big Brother
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by Spike on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 03:49:36 AM AEST
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I really liked this one - smooth-flowing, heartfelt and genuine. I have two brothers, but they never represented this to me when I was growing up. If this is more than just a good creative theme, then I envy what you have.
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