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Once So Strong
Contributed by
jesika
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Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:17:31 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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He's gone, I can't believe it No longer friends, we're done Every single thing we had Is left with me, just one One mind to remember One person to forget One heart left to mourn the loss One more thing to regret One tear that I cried For every word he said One more reason to shut my eyes And put him out of my head But I swear it's not that easy Much harder than they say I can't just take a friendship Erase it and throw it away I can't believe he got so mad And everything went wrong All over something that was so small With a friendship that was once so strong
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Re: Once So Strong
(User Rating: 1 ) by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:55:51 PM AEST (User
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Nicely done. I know what it's like to suddenly lose a friend that was once close to you. :( |
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Re: Once So Strong
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:50:30 PM AEST (User
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excellent write. sooner or later he will feel what you feel too. anger cant last forever after all, and neither can the reasons he left. hell sooner or later put it in perspective. it just depends if it will be fast enough to put you two back on track. |
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