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Empty Feeling
Contributed by
OnlyInDeathITrulyLive
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:11:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The wind will blow
The moon will glow
The sun will radiate
The rain will precipitate
But in the end
All thats true
Is my love for you
As a friend we can only be
But cant you see
You mean so much more to me
Anything I do, its all for you
I want so much more
That my heart is sore
This love I feel
No one can steal
But this love I feel
Is a one sided deal
I can not understand
How I feel this way
I do not understand
Why you dont
The pain inside
Is like a landslide
Millions of tiny darts
Falling on my heart
An empty feeling
That I wish on no one
Copyright ©
OnlyInDeathITrulyLive
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2004-10-18 22:11:13]
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Re: Empty Feeling
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:14:01 PM AEST
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| I can related to this poem a lot. I really like it. You should really keep up the writing!!! -Ashlee |
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Re: Empty Feeling
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by macmcgovern on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:20:59 PM AEST
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Outstanding. Your talent is obvious. This is extremely well written. Is there a happy verse to this in the future? Good luck. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Mac |
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Re: Empty Feeling
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:21:31 PM AEST
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| amazing write. powerful and excellently written. very emotional. |
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Re: Empty Feeling
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by OnlyInDeathITrulyLive on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:35:45 PM AEST
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| Thank you for your feed back all. This is the first poem I have written and the feelings that inspired me are the strongest I have ever felt in my life. Happieness and saddness all wrapped up into one giant knife stabbing through my heart. |
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Re: Empty Feeling
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:27:09 AM AEST
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this is a great write, letting out your feelings is good but sometimes expressing them can always be a damage ending. Looking forward to reading more of your work good job : )
HeNo UnkNowN BuTtErfLY |
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